V. Analysis

Autoethnographic Narratives

The following figures map the relationship between people as invention influences and specific changes in autoethnographic webtext drafts. The drafts and reflection narratives used to generate these analyses can be viewed in full in the Case Study Hub.

Dancing Across Media

Figure 6: People Influences in DM1

Figure 6 summarizes the following changes:

• A: The pieces I was using for this draft came out of collaboration between Kerry and Kaustavi.



• Collaborator | Give | Media
• B: I worked with Kaustavi during this composing session and asked her permission to draw from materials included in an email conversation between her and Kerry.



• Collaborator | Give | Media
• C: I chose pieces based on conversations with Kaustavi and her expert knowledge and practice.



• Collaborator | Inform | Media

Figure 7: People Influences in DM2

Figure 7 summarizes the following changes:

• A: The media pieces I was working with for this draft came out of collaboration between Kaustavi, Kerry, and Amber.



• Collaborator | Give | Media

Figure 8: People Influences in DM3

Figure 8 summarizes the following changes:

• A: Kaustavi responded to this draft with suggestions to change corners, make backgrounds more diverse, and add a video of the dancing body.



• Collaborator | Inform | Media
• B: Kaustavi provided the additional pieces needed to make these changes.



• Collaborator | Give | Media

Figure 9: People Influences in DM4

Figure 9 summarizes the following changes

• A: Dan found the textboxes intimidating and suggested they be broken down.



• Consultant | Suggest | Text
• B: Kaustavi asked for animation, suggested and provided material for a glossary, and added her descriptions to the transcripts.



• Collaborator | Give | Text
• C: Cate suggested the addition of image-icons to the introductory text page.



• Colleague | Suggest | Media

The Magpie's Nest

Figure 10: People Influences in MN4

Figure 10 summarizes the following changes:

• A: Cindy suggested expanding the scope of the review into a two-part review essay plus reflection.



• Colleague | Re-Envision | Total
• B: Kris and Megan provided primarily technical feedback and did not suggest any conceptual or design changes.



• Editor | Halt | Total
• C: I chose not to make further changes in order to avoid making more work for Kris and Megan.



• Editor | Halt | Total

Religion, Remediated

Figure 11: People Influences in RR1

Figure 11 summarizes the following changes:

• A: I included the candle-photograph slide in a presentation for my colleagues.



• Colleague | Motivate | Media
• B: I prepared this web draft, including the candle navigation idea, in preparation for meeting with an editor and proposing a possible web design layout.



• Editor | Motivate | Navigation
• C: I made revisions to the first draft and sought out additional sources to revise the next draft in response to the editors’ feedback.



• Editor | Re-Envision | Total
• D: I started looking into sources on empathy like Other People’s Stories based on a conversation about the project with Sara, which influenced the arrangement of the mockups.



• Colleague | Inform | Splash

Figure 12: People Influences in RR2

Figure 12 summarizes the following changes:

• A: I started working on this version after meeting with Michael Harker, who said he was open to including custom web design but would need to check with the other editors.



• Editor | Motivate | Total
• B: I discontinued working on this draft and focused on the alphabetic chapter instead after Michael said he and the other editors were still working out how they wanted to host the collection.



• Editor | Halt | Total

Figure 13: People Influences in RR3

Figure 13 summarizes the following changes:

• A: Miriam provided initial audience for working to synthesize and make sense of pieces in progress.



• Consultant | Motivate | Total
• B: Bobby provided later audience for working to finalize more finished pieces in progress.



• Consultant | Motivate | Total

Figure 14: People Influences in RR4

Figure 14 summarizes the following changes:

• A: I changed the web design homepage to reflect the changes the editors asked me to make in the project introduction.
• Editor | Suggest | Splash



• Editor | Suggest | Splash
• B: I wasn’t sure whether the editors or press would let me incorporate these design elements into my draft.



• Editors | Halt | Media